I just finished my first non-NATA animation. It's the first part of a series, so it's mostly setup, but I'm pretty happy with how it turned out. I have ideas for the next few episodes, I hope to finish them quite a bit faster than what it took me to do this one. Anyway, here's the link. I would really apreciate some feedback on it.
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New Series! (Loitering)
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It's kinda tough, but if you check out ambient/environmental tags in the Audio Portal, you may find something appropriate.
VicariousE
Loitering looks to be a great series! (Getting back to the review on the audio left), Yeah, just compare it to a few other hot shit movie submissions, at the same volume, and you'll see what I mean, no need for fancy speakers, just consistency. One reviewer noted a lack of BGM, but it didn't bug me, but perhaps a ambient audio track that suits this ethereal setting might do. I used to be in video production, so forgive my anal analysis ;)
jlorp
I was thinking there should be some more ambient sounds when I was editing the original audio, but I just could not find much of anything that fit. I really just need to find some people to bounce ideas/rough drafts off of. It's really hard to be objective when creating something, and everyone I showed it to when in production just sort of said "Nice" or "Hot shit man", and it was nice but it didn't tell me anything that I could improve. So legitimately, thanks for the constructive advice. I'm trying to make better stuff in the future, and this sort of thing is super helpful.